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by Incandescence
  • October 8, 2008
  • Short Story

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LowKey
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LowKey wrote a review · Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:31 am

Come back to me.

He leaned forward and kissed her.

There was an awful choking noise over his face, and he heard the crunching of leaves as someone pulled away from him.

"The fuck was that?" Adam hacked from somewhere he couldn't see.


LOL


"Judah," Adam said sternly, abruptly. "We did what we had to."


But... I thought his name was Michael?


Many, many questions, can't wait for the next one.

Snake and thoughts

Funky. Very funky. So... he just imagined the snake? Though that doesn't seem to fit in with all the other strange things going on. Who are 'they', and what's this about needing to go to them? What's up with these woods?

That was one of the strangest dream scenes I've read. Funny at the waking up part, strange and... strange through the rest. But really, what's up with this place?

And where's chapter four?



the day belongs to expectations but the night belongs to me
— canopy