When the good times fade

by Iamspoken
  • April 24, 2012
  • Poetry
  • Realistic
  • I see the beauty with open eyes
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''When pain fades the good times 
away,like they never meant any thing.

You're drowned in the silence,
of your loneliness...
and all you can hear,is your heart beat
and every time it does,it hurts...

When pain fades the good times
away,like they never meant any thing.''
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ongoeslife
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ongoeslife wrote a review · Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:37 pm

Hi, you! ^_^ I happened upon this poem, and shall review it, 'cause I think it's worth reviewing =)

Overall, I like it. Really. I think everyone can relate to this, and if they can't..... I eny them very much.

I'm currently at school and have to get to class now, but I'll be back in about 5 minutes to continue this. Hold that thought!!



I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25