Hey, hope you're having a good day!
I'm here with a quick review. I like your poem. The rhyme scheme isn't bad, however I noticed a few grammatical errors in the stanzas 3, 4, and 5.
Overall, I wouldn't change anything else. When I look at poems (most of the time), I'm looking for authenticity, creativity, and rhyme schemes. You did pretty good. Here's the thing, I never really imagined a forest to be gruesome and grim. Ha ha, maybe it's because I haven't experienced it. Fantastic work! I look forward to reading more and more of your poems. Keep writing, you're doing great.
Keep working and stay strong,
-BornToBeGreat
Points: 338
Reviews: 13
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