Good job <3
Good for the soul most of the time
The really good ones are the ones that take over your body
The ones that make your eyes eyes water without warning
A smile forms when you are not trying
Some are deep and full
Others are light and airy
Organic in ways you can't explain
You also have the sneaky laugh
When you know nothing remotely good will come from it
Villains have this
No matter how dark they are
Goes with the character
Children playing
Sweet innocent laughter
Fills the air
Nervous laughter
Feels like you have all eyes on you
No matter what kind of laughter
Imagine how different the world would be without it
Hey there,
So your title "laughs" was the thing that lured me into reading this poem of your and I must say was not disappointed atall. 
I really liked it. Literally there was a smile on my face throughout. I loved the way you described different kinds of laugh, nervous, light, the one that comes from inside. It was really good. I myself have a booming laughter which *as my friends say* makes them laugh even more. Anyway good job!!!
Never quit writing,
Fangirl~
Well, as a guy who sometimes finds himself laughing, I really had to read this.
Ok, first of all:
"The ones that make your eyes eyes water without warning"
A very obvious mistake, you wrote "eyes" twice.
Second:
"Villains have this"
What do you specifically mean by "villains"? A super-villain? Or an evil person?
Third:
I recommend you to put periods or commas in the end of every line, it makes the poem "feel" better to read.
And that's it. Welcome to YWS, by the way!
Ruro here for a review!
I love laughing so I had to read this XD see how that works?
So let's run into the review now, eh?
First I'm going to point out a really obvious typo that I would've missed if I wrote this too XD
The ones that make your eyes eyes water without warning
You also have the sneaky laugh
When you know nothing remotely good will come from it
Villains have this
No matter how dark they are
Goes with the character
Hello, HFMWheelsWrites~
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Just like the theme of theme of the poem, I really could not imagine a word without laughter. It's everywhere.
In contrast to the review below, I slowly started to realize that punctuation isn't very significant in poetry, and that too much punctuation can be a bad thing. I feel as if it (the punctuation) is fine as it is, and changing it is your choice.
I think it would be a good idea if instead of giving us examples of different type of laughter, you could also share with us examples of things that triggered laughter. I think a good time to show the example is around here~
A smile forms when you are not trying
Hi HFMWheelsWrites! Cakerissa reporting for Reviewing!
This is a good poem. I like how it is happy. There aren't a lot of happy poems and stories on here anymore. This is probably the happiest one I've read since I joined. I liked how you added that laughter is good for even villains.
"Villains have this
No matter how dark they are
Goes with the character"
There isn't much I would change about this. Grammatically, it needs punctuation on the end of each line. So maybe more like,
Villains have this,
No matter how dark they are,
Goes with the character.
Just a suggestion. You don't need them. But, again, I really liked this. I don't think it needs any changes.
Keep writing!
Cakerissa
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