Hey there! Shey here for a late night review!
Firstly, I lied. It's not late at night. Secondly, awesome poem! It had an interesting style, one which I don't think I've ever seen before. On to the review!
The message of this poem is one I'm not particularly fond of, I admit. Generally speaking, I find poetry about relationship issues to be redundant and overused. (Still, I'm sorry if this is based on true events. 
) Despite me personally not liking the theme, I still appreciated the poem as a whole. After all, it was a very well written poem, and it had some amazing strong points.
I am a huge fan of the strange but cool rhythm. It goes from poetry to prose, back to poetry, back to prose. It's an interesting style that I don't think I've seen before, and a unique poem is always infinitely better. I wouldn't think to write poetry like this, since it doesn't fit the mental image of poetry most people have, including myself. It's a beautiful idea nonetheless. *thumbs up*
I also really love how this piece is formatting. Oh golly jee whiz, a formatted poem. I see enough giant blocks of text without stanzas labelled under poetry, so it's definitely refreshing to see some with. That's not to say the other poems are bad for their lack of stanzas, but a poem with is much better than without. It shows the poet is experienced, and has thought out their piece thoroughly, something I could tell you definitely did. Bravo!
Overall, great job! Keep up the great work, because I look forward to seeing more from you!
Points: 1983
Reviews: 176
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