The IT crowd

by GingerLizzy
  • September 5, 2007
  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

I just typed this in my lesson of ICT and the title is based on the comedy series called "The IT crowd". It's not good.. So be kind people. =]

-Lizzy

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Keys tappping,
People shouting,
Surfing the net,
Trying to forget,
That we have two hours of this...
Every Wednesday.

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Jasmine Hart
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Jasmine Hart commented · Wed Sep 05, 2007 9:18 pm

The pace and flow of this were nice. It might be interesting to write this from a few different angles, playing around with imagery and the likes. I'm not sure that the fifth line needs to trail off. Other than that, I can't fault this.

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Matt Bellamy
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Matt Bellamy wrote a review · Wed Sep 05, 2007 8:49 pm

Sounds like my old IT lessons, ah, so familiar. I think you captured the atmosphere well in just a few lines. Not fantastic, but I do quite like it. And kudos, The IT Crowd is awesome :D

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sarahcrosbeh
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sarahcrosbeh commented · Wed Sep 05, 2007 8:35 pm

xD


I feel your pain, i have the same



For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes."
— A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett