I think, perhaps, that you should begin at a different part of the story. I've read about a dozen romance stories that all begin with a girl being kidnapped by a man, or a group of men, and waking up like this. Often the characters have no real personalities and mirror only what the reader/writer wants to experience for themselves. Nobody pulls anything from reading these stories. I can tell from the beginning, though, that you have the potential to write a truly unique storyline, one that isn't a cookie-cutter version of something else. I wish you the best of luck. ;P
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