Hey there Kat here to Review for our lovely poem and Team WHY?
well this was very very interesting, like a painting in my mind. Yo could have dragged out the word stop even more to give and extra affect, I really loved that . S p a c e was cool too <3 I liked how it was a girl but it was also the world in the girl and hope of her imagination . like something inside something meaning something bigger. That's what I got anyways . I liked the second line also with the pounding. You really like using our words to create real and metaphorical images huh XD I wish I had her beautiful mind to escape to .
Thanks for leaving it so open I really wouldn't change much.
~Kat
Points: 431
Reviews: 305
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