short stroy i wrote when i had writers block
Ring,Ring, death is here.
The crackling rain thundered down upon the woman, drenching her black curls. She hurried down the street, constantly looking behind her. Ever since she had left the safety of the flat, eeriness in the night had conjured up. It followed her wherever she went, traveling with the roaring wind. She tripped as her mountain like heels hit the pavement awkwardly, sending the poor women tumbling onto the damp tarmac. Her head banged against the curb, creating a deep cut in the side of her head. She cursed as the scarlet blood dripped down her face, the warm liquid smearing her makeup. She slowly got to her feet, and stood at the pavement awaiting any passing cars. It was a dangerous act, but only one option was left, hitchhiking.
***
She stood shivering at the side, her sparkling eyes scanning the moonlit rode. But after an agonizing forty six minutes of waiting around in the dark, drenched in water and blood she had had enough. She shook her head and strolled of down the path, still weary of something following her. All of sudden there was bright lights, and then the screeching sound of car skidding to a halt. She opened her eyes and gasped as black Renault was parked at the side of the pavement the engine blaring loudly. Her eyes lit up and she cautiously steeped toward the car. The driver was an old man with hair aging and face becoming wrinkled. He looked wild eyed and disturbed. A scary grin whipped across his face, showing his blackened teeth. Hey undid his seat belt, lowered the window and popped his head through. Both adults stared at each other for what seemed decades before the man said something.
“Need a lift luv” said the man, his grin becoming even wider; it now practically stretched out across his face.
“U…u…um n…no it’s o…ok. I’ll w…w…walk. Don’t l…live far I don’t.” stuttered the woman who was now slowly retreating her footsteps back toward the direction of the flat.
“Don’t be like that, now come on, stop messing about and get in.” replied the man, but this time a lot more anger carried out through his lips.
“N…no I think I’m going to head o…off now. But thanks for t…the offer”, whimpered the lady. She turned and began to walk back to safety but then suddenly she screamed in pain. While her back was turned the man had got out of the car, and yanked her curly hair back demanding what he wanted.
“Now are you going to get in the car nicely, or am I going to throw you in. Either way bitch you are getting in that car.” Spat the man.
“Ahhha, please, p…pleasseee d…don’t hurt me. I h…have children I have a family”, and at that last sentence she wished she hadn’t said it.
“Children, aye what are their names”, laughed the man. Diggings his nails right into the woman’s hair, tearing it out piece by piece.
“HELP, HELP, HELP. PLEASE ANYONE, HELP MEEEE.”
“Hahaha, it’s just you and me luv, now get in the god damn car.”
“LET ME G…GO PLEASE,” she cried, screaming in agony as the man pulled hard on her blackened curls.
“Hahaha” laughed the man, loving the agony and terror he was causing.
The women whimpered, before realizing that it was no use screaming for help. Instead she approached it in a different manor; she reluctantly stepped forward to the vehicle but only as a distraction. The driver fell for this and stepped back letting her get in. She made one last sniffle to make it even more believable, before jamming her high heels as hard as she could down onto the top of his foot. The pointy heel pierced his shoe, and sent thick blood oozing from his foot. But this was just the beginning. She would make him suffer. And as soon as he gave a yelp in pain she stepped out from the car, and kneed him hard the privates. He gave an agonizing scream as he fell to the floor trying to ease the pain. He looked up, too meet her gaze. But she was long gone, nowhere to be seen. After a long painful struggle, the man finally managed to get to his feet. He searched long and hard for any trace of where she might have gone, but he found no obvious solution. Instead he retuned to his car and revved the engine. He didn’t bother to strap his seat belt and sped off in the distance.
***
Horns blared crazily, as the black Renault dashed through the street at well over one hundred miles per hour. Creating large tire burns on street bends. He was cursing out loud to himself, as the warm blood oozed from his foot. Ten minutes later, he was speeding full blast down a narrow country lane. Occasionally swerving out of control as the tires slipped on the wet surface. A phone rang somewhere inside his jacket pockets. He frantically fiddle inside his pockets, looking for the source of the noise. But then the classical happened. It hadn’t even been three seconds since he took his dark eyes off of the road. But in those three seconds, death had taken its course. He looked up, and a tramp was staring at him, laughing at him, in the middle of the lane. His eyes widened, and all went black. Bang.
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