Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
And we continue on with the beginning of the chapter before last.
First Impression: Okay..Janny taking matters into his own hands there. Good for him. And he assumes that the craft is in fact programmed to be able to travel back to a port. Big assumption there considering it's a craft meant for a hideaway.
Anyway let's get to it,
“Would you like to superimpose a different view on the window?” asked a calm female voice.
“What the?” Janny twisted around as far as he could. “Who was that? Where are you?”
“This is shuttle control interface Kiax Three. Please speak your command in concise Endoleon,” the voice replied.
Did Lestila just forget to mention something as important as a shuttle control interface? That seems like something that should probably have been mentioned.
He gripped the steering wheel tight, willing it to let him swerve to the right. All the while the dot in the picture was getting wider, the beeping getting louder. He squeezed his eyes closed as he blinked, desperately trying to force the missile to stop in its tracks. What even was a Horidonian missile, or a Horidorian for that matter? And what in the galaxy did it want with him?
Does he seriously not know what a missile is? That seems really unlikely.
Janny didn’t reply as he watched the missile that had passed beneath them continue forward. It powered forward as the missile got closer, barrelling out to meet it. When they collided, they one that had come from below the ship let off a puff of green dust, which settled on the other and slowly, silently, began to dissolve it. When the first missile was completely gone, the other turned around and zoomed back the way it had come, shaking the craft again as it passed. The backs of Janny’s legs shook for a little while after it was gone. Then a few sparks of pain shot around his thighs, settling into a dull tightness just above the knee.
That's a really good description there.
“Yes, it’s me. It was me. I saved your skin,” Lestili said. “Sorry it took so long. My radar noticed the missile hours ago but you’re so far out. Now, let’s just reset that autopilot. What you want to do is-”
So she hung around or did the radar detect the missile like immediately after she left? It seems like quite a coincidence that she just turns up out of the blue there.
“Look, TIPO has many enemies. The Horidorians were annoyed about this campaign we ran where we hacked some of their communications. But we were only doing it because they were contravening trade law. Everyone does it!” Lestili cried. She had clearly been through this argument many times from the speed at which she was talking. “But seemingly in this specific case there just so happened to be Gifens monitoring our communication and Gifens are the main competition of Horidorians in this one specific market. But that market was becoming more-”
Well this section of space is just full of people wanting to blow each other up for various reasons. Doesn't anyone get along?
Janny grinned. His heart rate did begin to speed up a bit, but he didn’t mind. “Look, Lestili, I was not made to be out here dodging missiles and hanging around in big black artificial space cubes-”
“It’s starlight purple,” Lestili muttered.
Once again I have to say the subtle humor is amazing.
Janny stared straight ahead and said, “Set location: Hub Six, Flexie District. Or the nearest port to that, or some such suitable arrival point.”
The question now remains....will shoot him out of the air or does the ship even listen to him?
Aaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Well another interesting chapter introducing this attach, although I feel like that whole thing was just to get Janny to snap and head towards the Hub and will be not be followed up on. Well, let's see if Janny manages to get away.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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