Published November 14, 2006
People say things that make me want to scream. Keep your hair long,wear skintight jeans. No!!! I want to shout. Leave me alone. I want to be me!
Reading Star Wars ,cutting my hair and wearing comfy jeans thats me! Listening to Hannah Montana,reading Eragon thats me! Shakespre said " All the world a stage", but it doesn't have to be. Not going shopping except in bookstores,that may not be you but thats me.
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Hey whats up?? Well this isn't poetry but it can stand out to a lot of people. I am glad that you came up with the subject because it is so true. People will always try and try to tell you to change your look and try to be something that you are not. Sometimes I feel like yelling that out to. But I definitely like it. Keep up the good work.
Lina
Ah, take the ideas and make them poetry, Alanna. For now, this is moved .
Thanks!!!!
Mmm. This...this is not a poem. This is you writing about what you like to do and proclaiming your originality. This is a journal entry or a proclamation to a friend. This is not a poem. I would suggest you research the elements of a poem and try again. Thanks.
Er... Alanna. This strikes me rather as better material for a blog entry, not exactly poetry.
Fine message, I suppose, but this really is not poetry.