Published May 2, 2008
A want turn into a need,
and there's blood in your sweat-bead.
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You got it right, Elmear.
I was hoping to read something even deeper and more contemplating (is that a word?), though. It's a good subject, you could write about it on and on. But because I haven't read any other text by you yet, I'm not familiar with your style. Maybe this is what you do, short and concice poems.
I'll see about that.