I was afraid of the darkness and my head is fill will fearful thoughts
But suddenly,you came right up to me
You look at me
You're smiling at me
You hold my hand
And walk with me
Through the dark and scary nights
I see your smile your so brave and calm
I see your eyes fill with peace and love
You are the star
That lights up in the dark
You are the star
That lights up my way through the nights
You just keep on glowing,and glowing
Just keep on glowing in the dark
You are the star
I see your smile
You're so brave and calm
I see your eyes
Fill with peace and love
You are the star
That lights up in the dark
You are the star
That lights up my way through the nights
You just keep on glowing,and glowing
Just keep on glowing in the dark
You are the star
You are the star
That lights up in the dark
You are the star
That lights up my way through the nights
You just keep on glowing,and glowing
Just keep on glowing in the dark
You just keep on glowing and glowing
I'll always keep you in my heart
You are the star
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Thanks for your comment!!!Yes,now that you mention,I think I did some mistakes.About that 'fill',I did think I wrote it wrongly.Thanks for your help anyway!Oh,I wrote this song for my mum anyway.Thanks~
Hey! Okay, so classic song about someone special. From what I can tell, it's pretty good. But, there are just a few things i noticed.
I'm pretty sure it needs to either be, filled, or full of.
Mkay, well, i think it just sounds weird to have the word 'me' at the end of three lines in a row. I like the one in the first line, because it goes with, suddenly. You don't have to take this suggestion, because it might just be my own oddness.
Now, because this is in lyrics, i'm not sure if you want this to be a type of song, or something. If so, you'll obviously need a some more verses to mix in. Mainly because it's not that interesting, when after the first part of this it is just repetition. Just my thoughts. Hope this helped...or something