Published November 3, 2008
Happy Birthday Mummy,
Your cake was really yummy.
You're growing older every year,
Mummy, I love you my dear!
More wrinkles I see,
Someone's ageing! He-he-he.
My mummy, pretty and funny,
This lady's allergic to bunnies.
My idol, the superwoman,
The lady who always has time for her children.
The lady who's not afraid to fail,
When she fails, she does not wail.
She gets up quickly on her feet,
Loves to eat popcorn that are sweet.
Knowledgeable, a bit over sized,
Always bargaining for the best price.
"1*Kaypo" queen, super "2*kiasu",
Thinks I'm really "3*suaku".
Happy Birthday Mummy,
Your cake was really yummy.
You're growing older every year,
Mummy, I love you my dear!
#1 Kaypo = Busybody
#2 Kiasu = Scared to lose
#3 Suaku = Blur
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Thats absolutely adorable, hahaha and I love the out there humor of the whole piece because its one of the ones that make me happy not just like a standard old poem.
Im not a fan of them as much as I am a fan of just random kind of outgoing type stuff.
Its not really the best format for poetry and it doesnt have stuff that a normal poem does thats a not a bad thing in my book thats what I like about it
Because I believe that poems are just songs and they're ment to be read allowed and they are. And thats why some people forget that and try to be all deep and oh you FORGOT your comma's and im like you forget what poetic license which lets you write it how you want because songs are and so should poetry.
I like the whole atmosphere of it..While I was reading it I could visualize it. Has a nice bit on childhood innocence to it. The point of view is a good factor I can honestly say its heart felt:)