Froggy

by DragonWriter

Published June 15, 2007

I apologize for all bad feelings
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Oh, i have a froggy
his name is soggy
he is a ugly froggy
just like you

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Snoink
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Snoink commented Comment · Jun 16, 2007

...yeah.

Try again?

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whence
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whence commented Comment · Jun 16, 2007

Gah... it's people like you that make this section lose respect.

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Rydia
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Rydia wrote a review Review · Jun 16, 2007

First, this needs to be longer but then I don't think you're being serious...

Oh, i have a froggy
his name is soggy
he is an ugly froggy
just like you

Maybe this would work as a chorus for a children's song but try and write some verses or something okay and make it humorous or meaningful.

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Ofour
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Ofour commented Comment · Jun 15, 2007

Hahahahahaa, oh that's just, lol, hahahaha, it's just so FUNNY!


It's not funny.

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Tempest
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Tempest commented Comment · Jun 15, 2007

Errr... lol

DragonWriter wrote:he is a ugly froggy


Should be an.



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