Published October 24, 2012
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Hey Denia!
Excellent poem, but I'd like to correct your spelling on this part:
Other than that, it's flawless!
Keep on writing! I'll see ya around!
How very dramatic.
Yes, the images presented in this poem are absolutely splendid. My favourite part:
Truly a masterpiece.