beautiful use of diction and i love the way you speak of love manifesting more evidently in distress. the structure was great and your emotions came through very evocatively, i could definatley feel your emotion with every passing line. I love the way you speak of love as a healer, it was almost like you were describing the ressurection of your own soul. very beautifully written! the only thing i would say that can be improves is perhaps articulation and word play! its always great when poets can hide the message behind the words leaving the readers to ponder upon its true meaning. over all great poem! was a delightful read with an important take away message, of true love and acceptance.
Points: 9
Reviews: 8
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