school report on what you did this summer

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

Anyway let's get right to it,

You see my best friend died or was murdered 3 or 4 years ago and we didn't bother with an autopsy, for there was no blood or strangle marks. She was 78 years old and we just assumed that a hart attack had taken place. So my older sister and I took a trip to her house one evening to take pictures of the tree in front of her house. We took some pictures than returned home. When we pulled up the photos on the computer we noticed a girl standing in what used to be her bedroom window. At first we thought it was just a little girl but when we zoomed in we could see right through her eyes... So we carefully zoomed in more to find she was either smiling or laughing at us and when we zoomed even more...She looked as though she was flicking us off. When we moved onto another photo of the front door we seen a women standing there, but when we took the pictures we didn't notice anyone in the windows or doors....So we moved on to the next picture to find what seemed like Her standing there in the front door.

Oooh well this is an interesting one. We've got ourselves a distinctly mystery like vibe to the whole occasion and I am loving the direction it is going on. There's something rather unique to this mystery in the way that its presented and that's making this so much more exciting.

The way this seems somewhat like some sort of police investigation really elevates things to the next level here and I am loving the vibes that it manages to create so far. There's something about this doesn't quite try to shoot up the mystery but rather presents it as an interesting anomaly that makes this more powerful.

About two weeks later we went back deciding we should do something, we weren't going to tell the current owners but we were gonna do something... My sister parked across the street at a bar and got out. I didn't know what to do so i followed her. She crossed the street and before she even set foot on the property the screen door flew open. No one was pushing it open but it kept open, my sister didn't budge. Then a gust of wind picked up and flew through the tree's leaves. When my sister decided she was headed back i decided i was heading towards what ever it was. I walked up the short pathway and stood in front of the screen door. Suddenly i heard laughing and then historical crying and sobbing i glanced in the driveway were no cars was to be found. When i looked into the window beside the door a face came to it, i recognized the face immediately as the little girl who was in what used to be her bedroom. Startled i ran across the street and got into the car."GO!" i screamed as soon as i shut the door. With that she speed out of the parking lot and onto the street. When we passed her house we both looked over at it and seen the girl laughing at us.

That turned out a little bit more convoluted than I thought. I feel like things got a bit clunky towards the end of it and the flow went a little haywire. Given that its a more active scene I think perhaps splitting this up into smaller paragraphs and lingering a little more on some of these moments should help out with that. At the moment its a good little conclusion to the mystery built up from before but it needs a little something more here.

Aaaaand that's it for this one.

As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.

Stay Safe
Harry