It's That

Daniel, I like how you expressed your emotions about school. Good use of repetition "it's that", yet this seemed like one big run-on and many times it was dificult to understand and required rereading. You need to add punctuation. Although it's a poem, punctuation is used in poems as well. In addition, spell check before posting something (ex: unusual). Good start and keep writing. Hurtado

Hello!
First off you need punctuation for the ends of your lines because as of right now its a run on sentence. Also, some of the lines seem to be cut at the wrong place. I would just go through and check those. You have also spelled "unusual" wrong.

I really did like this poem however for its idea. To me it captured a wonderer's feelings of school. I say "wonderer" referring to the people who actually go through life taking time to notice everything and think about everything. I even think you could make this poem a little longer because there is that whole "wondering" aspect you can reflect upon in this writing.
Happy Writing!

Hello!
First off you need punctuation for the ends of your lines because as of right now its a run on sentence. Also, some of the lines seem to be cut at the wrong place. I would just go through and check those. You have also spelled "unusual" wrong.

I really did like this poem however for its idea. To me it captured a wonderer's feelings of school. I say "wonderer" referring to the people who actually go through life taking time to notice everything and think about everything. I even think you could make this poem a little longer because there is that whole "wondering" aspect you can reflect upon in this writing.
Happy Writing!