Okay, this was great.
As a christian, I can truly appreciate this, I'm going to let my friends know about this, and show it too them.
It was amazing, your characters are believable, real, and emotional.
I really am wishing there was more to this, really.
But that's just me getting in trouble with short stories, lol.
I like it how you made the miracle, the real miracle, come by.
It was great.
The idea is, for me historical, and goes well with the bible. I appreciated it a lot.
Your grammar is exquisite as well, I was only able to find a couple of minor mistakes that I think some other people will have already pointed out too you.
I don't read much Christian writing around here these days, or anywhere. And this was a great change. I'm going to go and look through your other work, do some more reading on what you write.
Keep up the good work, I'm glad to find it.
Some day here I'm gonna try one of these, a Christian story like this.
It was inspiring.
Keep writing - you have my compliments on this for sure.
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