Heya LordStar!
Hope you're doing well today or tonight, depending on what side of the world you're on, obviously. i'm here to give you a review for RevMo! Let's dig right in.
Whoa!
First of all, I was not expecting that. Like not at all. But - my gosh - the words are bone-chilling! Especially the way you made the right side one italics. It's like someone's whispering softly in you're ear. And then the left side on is like someone talking from far away. I'm not sure if that's how others see it, but that's how I see it... And I love it!
Second of all, I didn't see anything at all to point out. No grammar, punctuation, or anything stuff! Bravo with this poem, Star! It's fantastic and very deep, if I must say so myself.
Well anyways, this piece was a delight to read, and I can't wait to see more from you in the future. Of course, if you have any questions, feel free to ask me whenever!
Keep on writing!
~Liberty
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