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Thanks all for the great reviews and all the great advice. It is really appriciated! hope to hear from more of you and thanks amillions to those who have already added the opinion!!

ChinaCookie wrote:Eyes briefly meeting
Hands sliding down my back
My heart pulsing rapidly
This angle of attack

Lips touching abrasively
Bodies demanding passion
Words whispered with desire
And meaningful passion You just said passion. Use a different word.

With our legs interwining
I got feeling from within
The feeling so gratifying
It is a sin

With us there is no limits
No secrets to unveil
Every word you whisper
Is erotic with detail

With our fantasies recited
And your whishes slowly granted
I soon begin to realize
It's my name you're softly chanting

A rhythm in the setting
Of music softly playing
Its tone is precisely amorous
With the lust you are displaying

I tell you
of the wishes I want fufilled
As I begin to lose focus
My conscience begins to rebuild

As you aggresivley twirl my hair
This when I realize
This encounter is a mistake
My breathing heavily increases

I scream out
Your name
But it's far from delight
I realized I let myself go

I pull away with tears in my eyes
Yet you knew what was wrong
You pull me close
I cry the most

I pull away and say I'm sorry
You know this is all a mistake
This thrill we experienced
You know your love is fake.

ChinaCookie wrote:Eyes briefly meeting
Hands sliding down my back
My heart pulsing rapidly
This angle of attack

Lips touching abrasively
Bodies demanding passion
Words whispered with desire
And meaningful passion

With our legs intertwining
I got a feeling from within
A feeling so gratifying,
It is a sin

With us, there are no limits
Nor secrets to unveil
Every word you whisper
Is erotic with detail

With our fantasies recited
And your wishes, slowly granted
I soon begin to realize
It's my name you're softly chanting

A rhythm in the setting
Of music softly playing
Its tones are precisely amorous
With the lust you are displaying

I tell you
Of the wishes I want fulfilled
As I begin to lose focus
My conscience begins to rebuilds

As you aggressively twirl my hair
It's when I realize
This encounter is a mistake
My breathing heavily increases

I scream out
Your name
But it's far from delight
I realized I let myself go

I pull away with tears in my eyes
Yet you knew what was wrong
But still you pull me close
I cry the most

I pull away and say I'm sorry
You know this is all a mistake
This thrill we experienced
You know our love is fake.