Hello! This was a lot shorter than I expected but there is so much one can take away from this that can't be taken from a page long poem.
For the first line, you introduce Death and then the rest of the poem is describing where Death is--basically, everywhere. That is cleverly written.
You use diction people may avoid because of its simplicity but by using it, you make your short poem strong and meaningful.
Overall, I agree with alliyah. I was like "That's it?!"
Great job!
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