AND I'M BACK
Hope you're doing well! <3 I'll get right to it. :')
Sometimes I wondered what the teacher would do if I just refused to come out of the stall.
This guy's thought process is very interesting and like,, I like that. I never thought about that xD
I don’t bother. He wants proof I was vaping. I don’t care.
I feel like at schools, a lot of the times, the students will start arguing and claiming they weren't vaping or whatnot, and then obviously end up getting detention/suspended, I don't really know how that works. But in Peter's case, it's obvious that he doesn't care, which probably emphasizes how stressed out he is about the ~current situation~. I think you portrayed that pretty well!
“Well done, you’ve solved it. Maybe they’ll give you a raise.” I flashed the vape in front of his face.
[...]
“With pleasure,” I mumbled.
savage xD
At this point, with the principal's office thing, and Mr. Saltzman being Meany Pants, I'm getting Middle School by JP vibes xD
Mr. McNally and I went way back. He used to be friends with my dad, so he tried to be my friend and get me off with lesser punishments whenever I came to see him.
yay?? But I think Peter doesn't really want Mr. McNally to be friendly with him. :/ takeadvantageofitbro
I considered playing dumb, he honestly might let me get off free because he gets along well with my dad and probably didn’t want to do the paperwork involved with actually punishing me.
There's paperwork involved in punishing students? I'm getting serious serious Middle School by JP vibes.
I wouldn’t know. He’d actually have to come around the house for once and spend time with his kids.
Gah :c I like that you sort of wove this bit into this chapter - I think it works pretty nicely and doesn't really disrupt the flow! We also get to peek a teeny bit more into Peter's family life, which is nice!
I would have rather just been handed my punishment so I could go about my day.
There's one thing that I absolutely must know. How is Peter such an amazing student, but at the same time, he's getting in trouble and is also completely casual about the fact that his punishment should be handed over to him so he can deal with it sooner rather than later and just ahhhh
Suspend me then.
BRO NO omg I'm dying I don't like that he's being so casual about this. It's not sitting well with me aghhh D: He's such a wonderful student, and he's just letting himself get suspended. He's going to make himself look bad when it's time to go to a new university and this is messing with my brain if you know what I mean~ xD I know his situation is probably super stressful but I don't think a good student who gets nothing lower than an -A wouldn't mess with their higher education??? So far it doesn't fit his character. I mean, maybe he doesn't know how to handle situations like this? But he's in grade 12, wouldn't he be mature enough to know not to mess with his future? Or maybe he's super confident about
agh maybe I'm being too sensitive about this xD
My mom technically worked from home as a “lifestyle blogger” but spent most of her day getting injections and fillers and massages and facials and acupuncture and anything else that she thought would keep her from looking her real age.
This,, is interesting @_@ It was mentioned really smoothly - I like that!
No surprise there.
*looks over half-moon spectacles* hm
Assistant. Sure.
I'm, uh, assuming that Peter's parents didn't give him or his siblings (did you mention him having any?) much attention as they grew up. It's unfortunate :/ But I guess this is pretty much Peter's life unless his parents' negligence just recently started~
What did he know about my home and my family?
Ack, I want to know about his home and family >.>
Yay! We're getting the same amount of family and school information that we got in the first chapter, in Luna's POV! Now time to see what Peter's family is like.
I turned the TV on just for some noise.
complete mood
~
Alright! Done with this chapter too now. If you think my reviews are good enough for big picture comments, please do let me know so I can read the rest of your chapters because I love the plot of this story and I do hope I can continue with the rest of your novel! c:
Anywho, I feel like I already mentioned quite a lot of things above, so I don't think I need to mention anything else. :') But I'm super duper hyped that we could see both the family and school side of Luna and Peter. It's very interesting to see how different both of these characters are and to see how the plot will move forward. o-o
That's it for my review! Hope this helped somehow. :) Lemme know if you have any questions. ^^
Wishing you a singing, dancing good time <3
~Lib
Points: 825
Reviews: 453
Donate