You are my best friend,
You know everything i did and do,
There are no secrets between us,
You feel my pain,
You feel my joy,
So why is it that i do not acknowledgte you,
Why do i hate you but not love you,
Why do i feel that i cannot confide in you,
When i need to confide in you,
Why is it you know me but i dont know you,
Why do i fell embarrassed or ashamed around you,
When all you are is me,
A part of me i shoud love, celebrate, and confide in,
So what am i so afraid of?,
Fear of rejection,
From a part of me who loves me no matter what and is proud of me no matter what.
So now i want to say thank you for loving me,
Even though i dont always love you back.
*Please tell me what you think of it*
~Christina~
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I love Myself and Myself at least claims to love me. Good poem, i know how you feel to an extent but it looks like i love myself more than you love yourself.