Hey Caitlyn! I'm Myth and I'll be dropping a short review.
I don't see much wrong with the poem. It's nice. There were just some grammatical errors that I'd like to point out and that's all.
And you never notice; always holding your head high,
Magic is everywhere
Don't you see?
The usage of semicolon here is incorrect. The semicolon should instead be placed after 'Magic is everywhere' and the comma should be in the semi colon's place. There should also be a period after 'high'. Let me just write it down for you to see what I mean.
"And you never notice, always holding your head high.
Magic is everywhere;
Don't you see?"
I hope that clears it. It's the same correction in the repeated lines, so just note for when you're correcting. There is a tiny exception for the final part however.
Magic is everywhere
Can't you see?
The magic that appears around you and me.
There's should be a semicolon after 'Magic is everywhere' like previously but I think the last line should have a hyphen to separate it from the previous line only because it is so related to the thought behind the previous line.
So, that's all. There's a pleasant idea behind the poem and it's been organized well. I don't really have an interpretation because it was more or less a straight forward poem. Of course, magic is being used as a symbol for many things but the thought being distributed is pretty straight forward in my opinion. It's not too deeply buried. It's a clear poem.
That will be all. Keep writing!
Yours sincerely,
Myth
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