Hmm... I like this. I can read it two different ways - from the eyes of the volunteers, or from the eyes of an outside specatator. I like how you present both the frustration and impatience of the high schoolers along with the kindness and unfortunate circumstances of strangers.
Oh, and I REALLY like the ending - it's not that it was really unexpected, but it adds a cold charm to the message.
I'm not sure whether this should really be in poetry format, however. A short story might fit it better. Poetry is generally reserved for multiple meanings, metaphors, and a general connection with the reader. Ask Brad (Incandescence) for a better description. My point is, I think it would work equally as well, if not better, as a short story. You could even add a few more details to each singular event.
Whatever you decide to do with this, it's a very good message, and even the title adds to it. Good job.
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