Published November 29, 2008
frozen toes
runny nose
raspy throat
doctor's note
whooping cough
dozing off
having this cold
is growing old
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This is supposed to be very childish. I wrote it really just was for fun because I was bored. hope You enjoy!
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Haha I like this a lot. I especially like the last two lines.
No suggestions (: