Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Before you continue reading this you should know that this piece isn't a novel nor a sequence of short strories, but more a written interpretation of the world I inhabit. One might even consider it to be a diary though you should bear in mind that the characters in it merely resemble the people I am relating to in real life and that this 'diary' is not one I keep securely locked from those who can't bare the temptation to read it so may you be free of guilt when you indulge yourself in the twisted storyline. May I also add that not all events that occurr are direct from personal experiences however I'm sure you will be able to correlate with them in some way as they will be possibilities and examples of my accounts in amongst society. Although my writing ability and vocabulary choices will possibly, at times, seem as though I am in 3rd grade, I hope I will be able to capture the hidden drama that has erupted since beginning Year 10. As you read, I will feel as though my writing is a success if I present you with interesting ideas and thought-provoking concepts on how teenagers interact with one-another amid a seemingly demanding world. Thankyou if you have kept up with me this far and it would be wonderful if you wish to follow my 'dairy.' I hope you enjoy it if you do!
Okayy...so we've got ourselves a very intriguing piece here. It definitely makes you think twice about exactly where its trying to go here. On one hand, it sounds like the author here is about to write some form of diary, and well, its a bit tougher to say if this is meant to be from the author's actual life, or if this is to be the diary of a character here. On top of that, with this being called an introduction, its a bit hard to decide exactly what you're trying to convey, but well I'm gonna assume this is maybe a character writing a diary and this is how they introduce their diary.
Soo..on that note, diving into this introduction here, we've got someone that appears to want to write about their life, but not necessarily sticking to the actual details. This seems to suggest that the person is going to tweak a few situations here and there although the reason why said tweaking is occurring is not really specified all that well here. Soo..this does leave you with quite a few questions as to what exactly this diary's purpose is meant to be. The voice of the person righting here is also not the most likeable and I think that may end up being a bit of a bad thing here. On the whole, there's a couple of interesting bits going on here...buuut, I feel like there's just not quite enough to properly hook a reader and the voice of the one talking here isn't the kind that instantly makes you want to learn more about them.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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