WOW I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING I have to say that was an extremely well hidden plot twist! Despite having multiple guesses as to what could happen if he ate too much jam, I still couldn't predict the ending! I think that's definitely my favourite part of this story! Another thing I loved is the tone and atmosphere in the story: it was sort of eerie, unsettling and absolutely perfect for a horror story like this!Overall, I enjoyed this immensely! Thanks for sharing and keep growing <3
Hey! This was a story with an ending that I didn't see coming, and I liked it. So, let's see what I have to say about it!
The ghosts can’t hurt you, no matter what they want you to think.
“I have here a glass goblet and the last can of peaches.”
“I have here my baby teeth, saved from when I was little.”
“I have here a dried-up rose from a vase on the mantelpiece. They say it was of a lover who died of grief.”
“Go to that cupboard and eat a jar of the jam. Then you shall live another day.”
“Go to that cupboard and eat five jar of the jam. Then you shall live another day.”
“Go to that cupboard and eat ten jars of the jam. Then you shall live another day.”
Strange. There seemed to be one more ghost than usual.
Did the man just turn into a GHOST?!?!?
Hey! This was an interesting read. Here are some things I noticed:I think in this line
Apparently his family has known before he did
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