Haiku of Entry

by BismuthBorealis

Published July 6, 2017

E - Everyone

In Kaihu

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Wow a follower!

Such Speed! Such Grace! Who are They?

Big Brother! A letdown!

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gxldencrxwns
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gxldencrxwns wrote a review Review · Jul 6, 2017

*Slides in* Hola! Gxldencrxwns here for a review!

I can see that the meaning of this is that you got a follower, but it was from a bot (more like the creator of this site), instead of an actual person. Never fear! *Follows* I can clearly tell that this is a joke, so I'm not gonna go into with a lot of depth. But this actually made me laugh a lot, to be honest. I'm guessing that was your intention.

Anyways, I have more works to slide into, bye bye! *Slides away*

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hipstersquid
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hipstersquid commented Comment · Jul 6, 2017

Hello there its just hipster squid popping in for another poetry review.

I am almost positive that I took this into a completely different point of view. So what I felt from this was most likely completely different from the initial point or perspective. The last line gripped my heart. I took it as someone protecting like a big brother then messing up and letting the other person down. I most likely saw it from this point of view from past experiences. None the less, this Haiku was wonderful. It made me feel a past moment a memory that had been placed away and forgotten. Thank you for reminding me :)

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hipstersquid
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hipstersquid wrote a review Review · Jul 6, 2017

Hello there its just hipster squid popping in for another poetry review.

I am almost positive that I took this into a completely different point of view. So what I felt from this was most likely completely different from the initial point or perspective. The last line gripped my heart. I took it as someone protecting like a big brother then messing up and letting the other person down. I most likely saw it from this point of view from past experiences. None the less, this Haiku was wonderful. It made me feel a past moment a memory that had been placed away and forgotten. Thank you for reminding me :)



If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.
— Oscar Wilde