Hey, BirthdayHangman! Artemis28 here to review. Team Tardis for the win!
So, let's begin. This song was soooo random. I couldn't find any meaning, nothing I could see. You were really discursive, bouncing around from topic to topic. Toenails... eagles... coffee... veils... I don't know what you're trying to do, but for some reason, it's cool.
It was really humorous, in that sort of way that you kind of don't know what you're typing but you're doing it anyway. I would like to know why you decided to do that type of style, though... did you feel random? Did you feel crazy at some point? I liked this song, though. Good job and keep writing, Hangman!
-Artemis28, member of Team Tardis
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