Hello! It is I, your friendly neighborhood Horisun, here for a review!
This poem is really great! The flow is awesome, the word choice, on point, and the metaphors, amazing! I did see some places where (I think) there are missing commas, like after "Vivid rainbows can be seen" and "Beauty is again alight"
Other than that, this poem is really great! I'll leave you like! Keep on writing, and have a great day!
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