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by Bellarke

My friend, you deserve the happiness more than anyone I know.

All you have to do is communicate, talk to me

Don't stay sad all day, because I need you to be happy.

I don't want you to be sad because you should be happy

Sometimes, you are sad, but that does not mean that you should let it control you.

Once again, you deserve all of the happiness in the world

Nobody will make fun of you when I am around to help you. Because I will kick their A$$.

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64 Reviews

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Reviews: 64

Tue Nov 06, 2018 2:36 am
Aliceinhorrorland wrote a review...

Hiya! IT'S REVIEW TIME! I think your poem was excellent and illustrated true friendship and i'm sure Madison enjoyed it. Great last line XD. I think your poem was really good and you must be really good friends with Madison to write such depths about friendship. I hope Madison likes your nice poem, goodbye, PEACE OUT, and write many more poems.

Bellarke says...

Thank you

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Reviews: 162

Tue Nov 06, 2018 1:31 am
FireSpyGirl says...

Love it!!!

Bellarke says...


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Tue Nov 06, 2018 12:52 am
FlamingPhoenix wrote a review...

Hi Shikora here to leave a review.

I really do think this poem will make your friend feel a lot better. It's nice to no that you think about her and want to make her feel better. I like it that your lines weren't to long, and they all seemed to just mix with one another. Making it a smooth read. Its also nice reading this, because I can feel the way you feel when you wrote this. So yes I think it will make your friend feel a lot better.
I do think that you should put full stops at the end of each line, or a comma. But that is your choice.
I really liked reading this poem, never stop wring and have a great day/night.

Your friend
Shikora. :D

Bellarke says...

thank you so much!!!!

Your welcome.

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Mon Nov 05, 2018 9:38 pm
sophies36 wrote a review...

Sophie here for a quick review!
This is super cute and caring and i bet your friend will love it!
M-this part is super selfless and i love it
A-this is a nice background piece of how good your friendship is
D-this is kinda like a plea almost like a please i need you
I- this is such a cute line that's pulling in "do it for me" vibes
S-ooooooo the good friendship in this is so cute
N-this is by far my favorite line in this because it shows friendship in that last statement. the i would do anything for you.i love this
overall-i love this. its the definition of friendship. good job and write on!

Bellarke says...

Thank you so much!!!

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Mon Nov 05, 2018 7:53 pm
Bellarke says...


An Angel who did not so much Fall as Saunter Vaguely Downwards.
— Neil Gaiman & Terry Pratchett, Good Omens