
Once upon a time, a long lo- oh wait, never mind. Recently, I was trying to find a website for young authors. In my search, I came across some crappy, un-developed, crude sites that just didn't cut it. I wanted to post my work where people could see it and tell me what they thought. In my search I found YWS; it was just like a dream come true. This place was a magical kingdom as great as Narnia; I fell in love with the place and now I cannot let it go. I decided to join, and wow but it was a great choice!
In my first days here, I admit I was a bit overwhelmed. So many awesome authors of my generation: so many people letting out their feelings and emotions through poetry. Not to mention the abundance of people letting loose in action and adventure. This site is like a goldmine that will never run out. As I browsed through peoples works of art, I gave out my inexperienced reviews (not that they are that much better now...) and just absorbing the feelings. I knew there were lots of authors my age, but I did not realize how many there really were.
Before I discovered this miraculous site I thought I was cut out to write stories, books. Man but was I wrong! I like writing stories, I am working on one right now and it is slowly progressing; but it is not my'calling'.I started my first few days here by browsing everywhere, shorts, poetry, novels, chapters, articles, just all of it. As I looked around, I found myself continually drawn to the poetry section. I had written a few poems as a kid, and looking back on them now it makes me want to sink through the floor and disappear from embarrassment. But I have now written a few poems, and I find that I love it. Poetry is beautiful, I realize now that it is an amazing form of art. Poetry is the word form of art, and as great as Galileo's art is; he ain't got nothing on Maya Angelou. Poetry is an art that comes from within. Poetry is, is Pouring out Your emotions, your feelings, your heart. Poetry is baring your soul, it is letting people see way down inside you and understand it.
Writing is like walking into life itself; you never know exactly what is going to happen. You pick up your pen and start to write, the ink trails forming into words and expressions. You start to let loose and your words turn into a raging turmoil of everything. You start sorting things into groups; trying to make sense of what is in your head. Slowly, you form comprehensive thoughts that you can finally write down. Until they no longer make sense, then you throw your pen down in frustration. I have said before that your mind is like a large jar filled with pieces of paper with words written upon them; when you cannot think of anything else you reach in and pull something out and keep going. Every once in a while though, this huge hand comes out of nowhere, reaching down it crams a lid on your jar of thoughts. This hand is the crazy terrifying, horribly revolting monster known simply as Lack-Of-Inspiration, and that lid is the 'Writers Block' we all know and fear.
There are some truly amazing writers here with some great works. I like to review peoples works, evaluating, contemplating, and using creative criticism to portray howIthink that people are progressing as authors. Recently, I have had a few essays in school that called for me to evaluate poems, short stories, and articles that I have read in class. Because of the reviews I have done on YWS, I was done with these assignments quickly and before I realized it. So thanks to the creators and authors of The Young Writers Society for helping me do well in school and encouraging me to become a better writer.
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(Murmurs to self) Hmmm.... One review, huh? Still in the Green Room I guess. (Pauses) Hmmmm...... (Straps on plastic gloves) Alright. Time to review this!
Greetings Autopilot! Holographic Ladybug here for a shiny new review!
This is so nice! It really goes out to all of us here and completely warms hearts even if you've never met some of them! (Starts to shed a tear, but is incapable of crying) Love this for many reasons. What is great about what you've done with this is that you're adding a bit of a poetic flare. This helped prove your point of poetry that you stated earlier, so amazing job on that! ^^ It also keeps this from being boring because let's face it: there are a lot of articles out there that are just so mind-numbingly boring. With or without the poetic stuff, you totally missed the boring mark because of the little thing which we call voice. I find myself commenting on voice a lot in reviews because that's mainly what can drive a piece forward, especially with first person. I mean, first person is first person and it comes from someone. Without voice, a first-person piece is nothing, boring, and not as good as it can really be. Great job on having that voice!
(In a posh voice) This means me. (blows on finger nails and rubs them against shirt)
Love the opening. PERSONALITY AND VOICE AND HUMOR. Love it.
I'm pretty sure that almost everyone who found it by search and not someone telling them about it can relate to this. I actually narrowed it down to two websites and chose this one because it looked nicer and more professional. The lesson here: good web design does have its purposes.
(Waves arms around madly) Like me! Right here! Over here!
Last message: it will come. Trust me. Time, practice, patience, and reading tons of things about reviewing.
Overall, thank you. (Bows) Nothing more to say really than a bunch of smilies!
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(Yeah, that's right, I changed my username to a bunch of smilies!)
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you likied this! Man but I love this site!
It's truly great, isn't it?
It is! The wait in looking for a site like this was really worth it.
How long did it take you?
the better part of four months
This was exceptional and had amazing grammar and spelling. I have wrote something for my school project called the modern Frankenstein and it would be very helpful if someone could edit it. In the future I would also edit a piece for you. Once again great work.
I would be honored to help you! Thanks for the praise on my work too.
Hi, AutoPilot. Here's a review, no, not a review, an appreciation from me for your short, beautiful, honest essay.

First, I would like to thank you to publish an essay like this one. It's really a great pleasure to read works like this one. Truly, YWS has helped all of us a lot. I have had the same experience as yours. Whenever I get stuck with any of my writing or work, I just ask help from my friends here. And they help me a lot. One of the best things about YWS is that there are some really good, friendly, honest people who help you, try their best to help you. And I don't really have to remind of the usefulness of reviewing. We all know it well.
Since this is a review, I would like to pin point something. It is - the theme or topic of the story is a very important one. And it's a deep one,too. I think, one can write quite a lot about this. Expressing gratefulness in few words without using much "adjective-full-lines" is really a good choice and way to write this. But, I wanted to know more. I wanted to know how feel about the people here. Also, why you joined here, how your first days were, how you felt etc. I really look forward to know these.
Anyways, thanks again for this piece. Thanks for saying "Thank you to YWS" on behalf of us. Cus we all share this same feeling,right?
I also would love to read your other works. And I will review them,too.
Thanks for the not-a-review!
I do see that there is some info I could add o this that would make to more interesting to read!
Thanks gain
you are welcome.