Young Writers Society

Hi, here for a review!

So, some of your grammar choices seemed a bit odd, and could be edited for clarity. For instance beginning a reason with "Because" is a bit confusing (reason 2 and reason 9).

For formatting, I would suggest making the numbers bolded if you decide to do another one of these lists. It just makes it look cleaner, and is easier to read. However, other than that your formatting seemed spot on.

Some of the references were a bit obscure. Inside jokes can be really funny, but this piece seemed to have an overabundance of them. Which sacrifices some audience identification with the jokes...

I didn't think all of the jokes were particularly funny, but that could just be me. With a 10 reasons why list you want to make sure to end & start with your funniest material, rather than looking like your stretching for material at the end. So you may want to consider the order of your list.

Overall, there did not seem to be any big meaning behind this piece, but it seems to have succeeded in it's task: that is creating a list and getting "likes".

Good luck in future writing and editing!

~alliyah

We're coming for you, Helena.......

These seem to be a daily occurrence now,

These are still happening?

Hi Felistia here with a review.

What a hilarious piece of writing, it had me giggling the whole way through. It was a good list and had me glued to the screen all the way to the end, which is what you need in writing. I can't find anything wrong with it and I think it's the best out of all the Why Nate is Afraid of articles.

Good work and thanks for the laugh.