Recently I have been getting into haikus so I'm not very good at review them so please bare with me.
The sun shines now.
Inside it is so stormy.
When will there be peace?
I felt like this was very bland and was void of emotion and any real message. I under stood the subject matter but felt like it wasn't delve into very deeply. All in all this was an okay poem. It could have used a little more emotion which would have made it much more interesting but it was enjoyable nevertheless. Good job and happy writing!
Points: 408
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