Legendary Six Prologue
It was the year 1412. The Great War raged across Lexin, or in today's world, The United States. The war was between the Mixos and the fallen angel Keegan. The Mixos were on the verge of losing the war, so they sent out their secret weapon to the front line. Their secret weapon were six little kids about 13 years old at the time.
They were Asher, master at weilding a sword; Alex, master at using puppets; Pat, an amazing Wizard; Kiki, Pat's twin witch; Kemp, master assassin; and Gabriel, the master archer.
They fought hard against Keegan, but were defeated easily. Keegan spared their lives, but altered their minds. The Mixos who saw this, decided to corner them and froze them. They have been frozen since, until now.
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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two reviews. You will probably never see this but....Imma do this anyway.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Uhh, well this is starting out a bit like a fable, but I suppose considering this is called the legendary six, I suppose that is to be expected and starting with talk of an epic war like this is certainly something that tends to get your attention here..so that is quite nice to see...and the fact that these secret weapons/ legendary six are just kids here makes things very interesting.
Uhh...well, usually I'm not a fan of the whole list of powerful beings technique of introducing characters, but I think in this case it actually kind of works, so that's a fun detail. I am a little concerned about the make up of this team though, first of all we have two straight up magic users, which makes me think the other sword wielders and archers aren't even going to really be necessary but even if you could make a case for them the assassin and the puppet master kind of confuse, I mean perhaps assassin is useful in certain scenarios but I just can't imagine how puppets will come into play among all of these other much more effective sounding powers.
Well...that's a twist, I was not expecting the six to actually lose there, so that's good to see, but hmm, and it looks like their lives were spared probably because of how young they were...but well, so they wake up after being frozen for a pretty long time...well, I will say it does make for a fun premise, certainly not a bad prologue this one. I think this is the sort of story that I'd probably read here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry