Ooh wooow! this poem is written about ''desire'' I love that....we have all our desire. We have desire to be someone different, we have desire to something we can not have and we have desire to hold something what we miss...we have desire for longing. We long for something what we don't see yet, we long for something that we couldn't reach here in Life and we long for being healthy in our Life. We long to be somehwere else and we also long for another day.
Time let us longing it makes us what we are. Desire is difficult, what we ALL have I think that everyone can relate to this poem!
You use powerful and strong words...you can inspire people with this work, at least you can inspire me, hahaa....
thanks for that
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