Hello, here for a quick review!
Your poem was really lovely and it made me feel a lot of emotions all at once. I can feel this person's struggle to get up and it makes me want to reach out to them and tell them that everything is going to be okay. I think that is brilliant because that's what poems are supposed to do, or any form of art or writing for that matter - make you feel connected to other people and their stories.
I like how real and honest your poem was, you didn't use big flowery words and that I think made your poem feel more genuine.
"Hopefully you’ll fade
But eyes won’t be wet."
The last two lines were absolutely lovely and I know it will stick with me for some time.
Good job on the poem. Have fun with your writing and stay safe!
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