Published November 1, 2011
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I like the idea; I don't have time for a thorough review though. Sorry.
This caught me off guard. I mean, I dunno, it sounds a bit clunky? Probably because of the 'rich shade f brown'. It may sound nicer if scrapped.Sorry it's sooo short.
<33 G'luck!