Published October 26, 2005
Keep a distance don't get too attached,
That is a rule for living.
No matter where you all go
Everyone will just end up hurt.
Don't waste your life relying on people, they'll just let you down.
Don't let anyone get into your head
Just keep everything inside
Everything hidden.
Lies and broken promises,
That is all that i've known through my life,
So don't waste your time hoping
This time it will all be different.
Your all better off alone
Away from getting let down.
These are the rules for living.
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You're okay.
Nice poem. It would really help the depressed person.