It's Mother's Day tomorrow and i want to give this poemto my mum, so any comments will be greatly appreciated.
For all that you have given me
For all the times you’ve helped me through
For all the times you listened
I want to say I love you.
I can say Happy Mothers Day
But these words are far more deep
They represent the life you have given
And all your love I’ll keep.
When it comes to real beauty
There is no one quite like you
Your beautiful and honest
Always loving and true.
You deserve to be eternally happy
So Happy mother’s day
Within those words lie lots of things
I do not always get to say.
Today is one special day,
Where I really get to thank you
For all the strength you’ve given me
For everything you do.
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She'll love it...are you from england, because in America it isn't until May...
But yes, I can assure you any reasonable mother will enjoy this fully.
I like it..'tis very sweet..
In some places I felt like the rhythm wasn't very good, but I think that's about it. One thing..in the first line of the last stanza you wrote "Today is one the special day"..do you mean "Today is the special day"?
My favorite stanza would have to be the second one..
Awesome work.
-*Shimmer