Somehow this poem gives me a nice, memorable feeling. Which is warm and cute. I like memories, and I like the way you describe one in this piece. I can vividly imagine where the narrator is, what he/she/you see.
There's nothing else I can say, really. You've perceived everything beautifully. One thing I would like to say, though, is that if I wrote this, I wouldn't repeat the word 'trees' twice, especially in the same stanza. But, nobody seems to notice that and think it's a flaw, so it's up to you. Personally, I think another word would suit the second 'tree' word. Perhaps branches? Or other synonyms.
That's all~
Happy Writing~!
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