originaly this was to come out diffrent but quite soon i found out it was more a feeling that is exsperianced. i leave this untitaled for the reason that it should be easy to quess and it allows the freedom of diffrent results in thoughts. im interisted in what is thought. (=
The sedation of the drug draws near,
The warm feeling of numbness starts,
With a stream of liquid that brushes your face,
Flows through the veins and takes a hold,
It manipulates the brain and rips through the surface,
Smoke comes and hides your shame,
An imitation is projected as your life and consciousness,
The blur of fun and images divert your thought,
A swirling of faces you once knew contort to devils,
A sick heart tries to thrive and drowns to sleep,
The over enhanced feeling falls away,
And is left for all to see and laugh,
A demand for sleep overtakes, and black is all,
Morning brings first the feeling of dread, and then the sight of regret.
thanks. ya the capitalisation things were not on purpose lol each line was meant to be capital lol. and the others were miss prints lol. ya it had started out with this random feeling i experienced and then it reminded me of this more familiar state of consicness. but ya i agree lol well thanks again (=
The warm feeling of numbness starts to begin
with a stream of liquid that brushes your face,
Flows through the vains and takes ahold,
It Manipulates the brain and rips through the surface,
[s]A[/s] smoke comes and hides your shame,
and Black is all
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