Young Writers Society

The first part was really what caught my attention most.
Especially This part
"There is not a way to write

About our Love

Nor are specific words that clarify"

That was quite nice to read.
Continue writing.. If you need anything else I'm always here C:

I don't really understand the title. Well, maybe it makes sense, I don't know...

This was a very pretty piece, I like the beginning the most.

It was really a lovely description.

Good job, I hope you continue writing such lovely things!

Howdy there!

I'm going to review this piece!

I agree with the others, this would make more sense as a poem. The layout here does not reflect what you're writing and isn't really visibly appealing which it could so easily be.

Firstly, this is really hard to break down. There is only one full stop at the end. I think the use of ellipses is good but perhaps it is used too much.

There is not away to write about our love Nor are specific words that clarify the feeling of being in love with you

I agree with Wherethewindgoes said. It would be a lot better written as a poem but you have good descriptive words:D very interesting to read too!

Salutations. Welcome to YWS!
I kind of like this, but I think it would be much better structured as a poem. Perhaps something like

A letter
A sonnet
A ballad
A novel
An ode
There is not away to write
about our love
Nor are specific words that clarify
the feeling of being in love with you
I could try to paint it
but these hues lack the vividness and brightness
you bring to my sublime reality
Sing
there are not highest nor deepest notes
to expresses the heights and shallows you take me
You-
you are
we are
Indescribable.

There is not away to write about our love

Nor are specific words that clarify

the heights and shallows you take me