Chapter 1
Liam
If you could give an unborn child a piece of advice about life... what would it be?
“Concentrate on school!”?
“Mummy and Daddy always know best!”?
“Don’t do drugs!”?
“Look on the bright side of life!”?
If it were me, it would be “Think before you speak”. No, forget that. It’d be “keep your trap shut”. No, not even that. “Superglue your mouth at first opportunity”. Or at least, that’s what I’d have said to myself.
12th February 2011. I remember that day so clearly, as if my history teacher burnt it into my mind because normally, I’m terrible at remembering dates or names. It was the day after the Egyptian President–Musterfar Ehap or something–was kicked out of power, basically, but I mainly remember that day because that was the day me and my friends had progressed to the next round of a swimming competition.
It was that day. That day that all this mess had started; all the hurt, the torn families, the pain, all started from that day. Funnily enough, it was supposed to be a good day. The day you win at something should be a good day to remember.
I stood on the cliff, peering over the edge at the spot where they jumped. Their clothes lay in separate, disorganised piles on the floor. Trousers, necklaces, bags, hairbands, T-shirts. When did this all happen? Just a few moments ago, they’d been standing there, still fully clothed, still smiling.
After the swimming competition, we’d gone to the beach that I was now looking at from the cliff. The sun sank into the horizon, turning into a deep, blood red. We sat in a circle around a one-use barbecue that I’d purchased (they’re more relaxed about regulations in Egypt) where the marshmallows were being toasted till it was charred leaving a gooey centre–just the way I liked it.
Lukas, the youngest out of all of us, suggested we play a game: Truth or Dare. We agreed to keep it clean for his sake, but he seemed to be the most annoyed about it. “So we don’t scar your mind and so that we don’t cheat on our girlfriends,” said Medo, who was probably the fastest swimmer out of us all. “Shouldn’t you be playing with action man?” he snickered.
“14 is old enough to play!”
“How do you even know the game exists?” said Jasmine, taking off her straw sunhat. “And I just lost the game, guys.”
A chorus of groans. “Jasmine!”
She cackled.
The bottle was spun and Lukas was dared to eat three marshmallows dipped in seawater. We burst into laughter at the horrified expression on Lukas’ face and laughed even more when he ate it. With the horror still on his face, he spun the bottle aggressively to choose who would be his next victim. The bottle span before slowing.... and landing on me. I covered my face with my hands. “No...”
“Yes!” he cackled. “Truth or Dare? Please pick dare,” he said, with a sadistic twinkle in his eyes.
“Truth,” I said, my hands still hiding my face.
“Why would you do that, Liam?” he sighed. “I don’t have an idea for a truth.”
“You could go all deep and philosophical: if you were in the Olympics: Egypt or England?” said Medo.
“That’s a hard one, but I can’t if I’m not Egyptian—don’t ask how they even let me do thi—”
“Hey! Hey, I’ve got one!” Lukas whispered in my ear; my eyes widened and I moved away.
“I-I-I’ll do—I think I’ll do dare, then.”
Lukas smiled and I was forced to drink a mixture of Miranda and seawater. It tasted thin but I could feel all the moisture in my mouth being absorbed; I flushed the taste down with a gallon of water and even then the taste remained. Next, it was my turn to dare someone else: Medo. He hid his face in his hands.
I looked around, searching for some inspiration. The cliff; the café; the road; the beach; the rocks; the sky, the sea; the cliff—
The cliff… Now that was a good one. “I dare you to jump off the cliff. With clothes.” I smiled. “Have fun.”
His eyes widened. “Are you—?”
I nodded. “Wouldn’t that be fun? I’ve done it a billion times anyway, Lukas was there, remember?”
“Do it,” urged the girls. “Do it, Medo!”
“Only if you guys do it with me,” he said, standing up and brushing the sand off his jeans. Medo said something in Arabic, which meant something along the lines of, “You’re all pussy cats if you don’t.” Keen to display their courage, the rest joined, taking their stuff and leaving the marshmallows on the barbecue.
We started at the base and walked along it as it rose higher up. It only ended up about 10 to 15 metres above the sea, just like the diving boards we’d occasionally used. The cliff narrowed towards the tip; a cluster of palm trees had been planted at the tip of the cliff. We stopped by the trees and everyone prepared for the dive.
“I’m going home after this… I told my mum I’d be home by then,” said Jasmine
“I don’t want to go home,” complained Lukas, trying to stifle a yawn unsuccessfully.
“Damien, you’re the only one who has to keep their clothes on for the dive. I hope you’re not planning to chicken out!” I squawked and flapped my arms like wings. Damien became very red faced.
I looked down into the calm sea, almost flat like an empty field. In the murky depths, I could’ve sworn I’d seen a Chinese dragon open its mouth, waiting for me to jump in, to bolt me shut and trap me forever. There were the white teeth, dragging the sand at the beach into the wat—no, it was simply a wave gently tumbling into the beach.
The wisps of blood, twisting, twirling, dancing like smoke, as it devoured your body.
No, no, Liam. Don’t think of that.
“Alright, you lot ready? Three… two… one… jump!”
They dived into the water, like bullets darting into the water, just like the many times we did while messing around on diving boards or like that one time that they jumped off this cliff.
Splash!
I watched them rise to the surface to the water, greeting them with a round of applause. “How was that?”
“That was amazing,” shouted Damien, his hair plastered to his face like seaweed. “Aren’t you gonna come down, Liam? Or are you too chicken?” He squawked and flapped his arms in the water. “Awh, what a shame. Liam’s too chicken to come down!”
I could feel my blood rush to my cheeks. I stepped back so that they couldn’t see me.
“Someone’s got to look after the bags! I’ll meet you back at the beach, alright?”
Problem was, when I arrived, they weren’t there. I told myself that they were probably still on their way, after all, it took longer to swim with clothes on. The water couldn’t have swept them away either. The water was calm today.
I waited some more, flipping the remaining marshmallows on the barbecue till they were charred as I tried to get rid of the possible worst-case scenario out of my head.
Fifteen minutes. They still hadn’t arrived.
Twenty minutes. No sign of them either.
Something was very wrong.
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