Hello again!
I liked your poem very much. There were no grammatical errors, but you did, however misspell a word or two.
It kind of seemed to me like you either thought about it before and typed it out quickly, or you were in a rush. "Remeber" should be "Remember". And "escapess" should be "escapes".
Overall, I give it 4 1/2 stars!
Sincerely,
~Swiftfurthewarrior
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