WOW!!!!!!!!!
That is all I can say. You've used your language well in this poem, it just needed a bit more gramma.....
But it blew me away, I think that you've done an amzing job 9/10 for sure!
And I like the way you've made it so that we - the readers- make the decision if it is a reality or that of a nightmare, truly amazing!
~Neverland
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