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This review of the above apology is solely for my amusement and the amusement of anyone who happens to stumble across this.
This poem is just horrible. Thee lines, no structure, and absolutely no poetic feel at all. This poem is totally due for a rewrite. The first stanza is too long and too short - the line is too long, and there aren't enough lines. There is no structure, and no poetic feel at all. What you need to do is click edit work and hold down the backspace button till your finger is sore.
This is how I'd rewrite it:
I really hope this review helps [bring amusement].
- noni >( ==)